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But it sounded so right! It fit the storyline so well.... |
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Sounds like it’s the dems who are cooking books here. What are the odds that this bit of "truth" will be debunked loudly enough in the mainstream for the anti-war mobs to ignore it? Odds are probably low. |
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Hmmmm, so just because the "front/back" thing turns out to have been hyperbole, there’s no possibility that there’s anything else wrong with the way the military makes distinctions between sectarian vs. criminal violence? Good example of disproof by fallacy. |
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Hmmmm, so just because the "front/back" thing turns out to have been hyperbole... If you can’t tell the difference between "hyperbole" and an outright fabrication, then there’s not a whole bunch you have to contribute that’s worth listening too, is there? |
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Hmmmm, so just because the "front/back" thing turns out to have been hyperbole, Hyperbole? More like a lie. |
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Actually I believe the book cooking, or at least impressive spinning, questions have dogged him since his tenure running Mosul was full of such good news and then once he left it seemed to go to pot. But I’m sure that’s just envious colleagues. |
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Wow, Retief, it would almost seem like he had a good handle on a situation that deteriorated after he was pulled off. Almost like he was better prepared and better able than his replacements.
I’m quite sure that no one here has ever worked for a capable manager and had it gone to hell when a seat-filler took over. Never happen.
I was not there. Odds are good that you weren’t either, but it would not be the first time that some REMF with rank blew a situation and played the arse covering game.
None of that counters the dishonesty/fabrication of the story that was promulgated.
Laumer would be ashamed. |
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But I’m sure that’s just envious colleagues. Well, I’m fairly sure you’re in a position to know, right?
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Retief,
I’ve been looking for a copy of the short story " For the Honor of the Regiment" for some time now. If you’ve got it, I’d appreciate. My copy of "Bolo" is still in Florida, with a bunch of mooks who wouldn’t be able to discriminate ’twixt rear and hole in the ground, much less handle sending my own property through the dang-blasted mail. I’ve picked up most of my backlog from various sources, but this one seems to elude me.
Any help would be yadda yadda
Regards,
Me
P.S. I still find you exasperating in the extreme, but the mark of a good bartender is to know when to ask for assistance. I need help with this and in (advance) return I will point you to the works of Theodore Sturgeon. Go for his short stories. Shottle Bop and Maturity come to mind, but you can probably find a copy of The Worlds of Theodore Sturgeon at your used bookstore for a dime. |
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Hyperbole. That’s what they claimed Jane Hamsher was doing as well. And the guy advocating a coup d’etat was doing satire.
I guess we should defend the Swiftboaters by just saying it was hyperbole...does that work for you Retief?
Heck, Bush can claim that the argument of WMDs was "hyperbole" too. |
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Hmm, a throw-away quip that was gobbled up by some of the punditocracy, is passed off as hyperbole, yet a 4 page document isn’t considered sufficient methodology.
Interesting point of view... |
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Q:
I think this is a good-faith effort on your part, so... thanks for trying to do some reporting. Good work. Etc.
I don’t think this demonstrates what you think it demonstrates, and I don’t really understand how you made this mistake.
The WaPo never claimed that MNF SOP officially uses that criteria, nor did the quote. The quote suggests what’s actually going on behind the criteria.
There’s plenty of wiggle room in the criteria that doesn’t specifically disallow this kind of fudging.
And frankly, fudging is the only concievable way to get this statistic.
General Petraeus told The Australian during a face-to-face interview at his Baghdad headquarters there had been a 75 per cent reduction in religious and ethnic killings in the capital between December last year and this month,
The question is open whether you can manipulate statistics to have this be technically correct while being wildly misleading (since violence against civilians in Baghdad is down by nothing like 75 percent!!), or whether this is an outright falsity.
And it’s impossible to know the answer for sure, when the Pentagon’s numbers and Petraeus’s numbers don’t even agree.
http://www.democracyarsenal.org/2007/09/fuzzy-numbers-a.html
But either way, this isn’t the WaPo’s fault. Petraeus has only himself to blame for, frankly, a silly claim that sectarian violence in Baghdad is down seventy-five percent. You can look at Petraeus’s own darn graphs and tell that general civilian violence in Baghdad is trending down by - generously - ten percent. Petraeus doesn’t have a theory as to why ’the surge’ would cause such a catastrophic fall in sectarian violence and a corresponding enormous spike in non-sectarian violence - and the reason is because it makes no sense. Thus, whatever methodology MNF claims to be following, they ain’t really following it - or else the methodology is screwed up. And the methodology looks ok to me, so I suggest that the senior intel official is right.
Would you care to explain exactly how this accurate methodology produced such a wildly inaccurate claim? Or are you going to look exactly as far as allows you to blame this on someone else, and no farther?
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The sad part of this is that commenters who let you think about this stuff so they don’t have to are going to come away from this completely misinformed. They look at the equation: "Someone claims the MNF methdology is screwed up" + "The methodology looks fine in this here official document" = "That guy was lying"
And they don’t even blink.
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The question is open whether you can manipulate statistics to have this be technically correct while being wildly misleading (since violence against civilians in Baghdad is down by nothing like 75 percent!!), or whether this is an outright falsity. And the source for your statistics is?"That guy was lying" Yes, your side was lying. |
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Uncle Pinky, I don’t believe Laumer uses "For the Honor of the Regiment" as a short story title. It is the subtitle of the first Bolos collection of stories by other authors about bolos. I’ve found the quality of those stories to be quite variable, and haven’t been all that into them. The line is spoken by DNE in the story "Field Test" which is collected in Bolo along with The Night of the Trolls, Courier, The Last Command, A Relic of War, and Combat Unit. |
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Back to the point for a moment, in the official ESV methodology one of the criteria for calling something an incident of ESV is a gunshot wound to the head. (Right at the bottom of page three under Executions.) But what if in a random driveby the victim is sprayed with bullets and is hit in the head and chest, strictly following the guidelines means you’d have to call it ESV because of the head shot. But maybe it isn’t. Maybe not all head wounds are created equal. Why is it so hard for you to believe that one head wound could look more like an execution (and therefore ESV) than another?
Harun, I didn’t start with the hyperbole suggestions but re swiftboaters, do you mean like Tommy Franks did at the Republican National Convention? |
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If anyone is actually interested in what’s behind the numbers, or what the casualty trend actually is, you could do worse than looking at engram-backtalk.blogspot.com. The good professor actually gives sources for his numbers, explains any adjustments and shortfalls in them.
Now we deal with unnamed "senior intelligence officials" who are evidently lying or misinformed. That is assuming they are not a complete fabrication. Does that make me a skeptic? Yes. After Rathergate, when it comes to the media, your choice is between skeptic and fool. |
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So, if one of the criteria for a good day, is that the sky is blue, then all days with blue skies are good days...
No matter that it might be 140 or -20 degrees out. The one rule says it must be a good day, since the sky is blue. Who cares what the other rules might say about determining if it’s a good day. |
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You can look at Petraeus’s own darn graphs and tell that general civilian violence in Baghdad is trending down by - generously - ten percent. Well, MarkD linked to this.
If that really is Petraeus’s graph, Iraqi civi deaths are down about 78%.
The same link indicates ICCC data suggests a 50% drop, and goes on to explain why ICCC likely undercounts. |
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Retief, thanks. Field Test it was. Having the title wrong might, just maybe, explain why I’ve had such difficulty finding it.
Thanks again. |
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Glasnost’s data source seems to have issues. |
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As I say over at ASHC, I was partially mixing up national with Baghdad numbers. But the actual reduction is more like a third if you count from Feb 07, which is when the surge actually began, instead of December 06. The numbers aren’t fudged, but they’re pushed to the screaming limit of positive framing. |
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The same link indicates ICCC data suggests a 50% drop, and goes on to explain why ICCC likely undercounts. And if it’s methodology undercounts, it’s probably done that consistently, ergo, the rate of change is probably the same, even if the numbers are higher.
And, in all fairness, Nov/Dec was the peak in civilian deaths. If someone wants to argue that based on 2 months data (Dec, Jan) deaths were already trending downward, and so the reduction in violence was inevitable, they are free to.
But the point is still valid, civilian deaths are down. That is a fact. Everything else is statistics.
Why shouldn’t the put the most positive spin on the numbers?? |
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Keith_Indy
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But the actual reduction is more like a third if you count from Feb 07, which is when the surge actually began, instead of December 06. The numbers aren’t fudged, but they’re pushed to the screaming limit of positive framing. Well, no, the actual reduction is between 50-78% (depending on whose numbers you use.)
The reduction since the surge started is roughly a third. |
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Keith_Indy
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